My Hook

WALT: Write an amazing hook that will capture my audience's interest.
 SC:I will have An interesting hook! Ask a question onomatopoeia figurative language. Vivid verbs. 

 bing! bang! boom!! My Remote controlled helicopter was stuck in a tree!! Man, I felt like a real dumby! My helicopter was stuck right at the top of the tree. It was the tallest tree I had ever seen. So i gave up, went inside and jumped in the shower to wash my disappointment away.

Haven you ever played this game before?

This is a game were you make up words with the one letter in the middle. Here are some photos of me playing this game. Is you would like to this is the link Wheel Words  Hope you enjoy.