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Wednesday 22 August 2018

My Hook

WALT: Write an amazing hook that will capture my audience's interest.
 SC:I will have An interesting hook! Ask a question onomatopoeia figurative language. Vivid verbs. 

 bing! bang! boom!! My Remote controlled helicopter was stuck in a tree!! Man, I felt like a real dumby! My helicopter was stuck right at the top of the tree. It was the tallest tree I had ever seen. So i gave up, went inside and jumped in the shower to wash my disappointment away.

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